Probing journalism
Headline from the Wall Street Journal:
Didn't some New York police get in trouble for a similar thing a few years ago?
Ok, enough cheekiness. Sure, the Journal had a readout that this was a story about the retailer starting background checks on its prospective employees (after stories and a lawsuit surfaced in South Carolina, of course, involving alleged in-store child molestation). But probe is one of those words best left alone, especially as a verb, with dealing with people or animals.
Try:
Sure, it's not as sexy. And it probably means some slots might want that "Background checks" in the subhed changed to something like "Background reviews" to avoid duplication.
But it's a lot safer.
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