Oops, needed a hyphen here
This from a recent ad:
“Join Dell, Microsoft and a guest expert for an in depth look at how OS migration can enhance security and end user productivity.”
That's either Freudian, or "end user" should be "end-user." ("In depth" can use a hyphen too.)
HT to WorldWideWords, a fantastic newsletter you should get in your email each week.
Labels: advertising, editing problems, punctuation
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