Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Turmoil at 'The State'?

Two things you won't necessarily read in The State today (or tomorrow):
  • Buyouts are being offered to two more copy editors, pretty much decimating the desk. That leaves what, two or three? Makes me believe even more the preparations are to move the work to Charlotte's new hub.
  • One of the biggest advertisers, Jewelry Warehouse, has pulled its ads after "boycott" messages from fans upset over columnist Ron Morris flooded various Gamecock message boards. Mediation hasn't worked so far, and if this post at 9 a.m. on the Cocky Talk board is to believed as coming from JW President Scott Satterfield, it's not getting much better:
To all Gamecock fans,

You will see a half page ad for baseball posters that we sell which were produced by the state. WE DID NOT RUN THAT AD - The State did.

I am in the process of seeing when they scheduled this and if I find it was after my conversation with them about ad suspention, then we'll have a whole different conversation today.

I am very tired of the controversy and am hoping this was not a concious effort by them, because it messes with the appearance of my word I gave Gamecock fans.

We have worked on many projects together and the state has control of when they run - we just were an outlet

Please, let's get on with the football games - Scott Satterfield



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Monday, August 29, 2011

One of the good guys, Tom Bardin, dies

I got a call a few hours ago to tell me, and now it's been confirmed, that Tom Bardin Jr., head of the S.C. Legislative Audit Council, has died at age 54.

He died while running in Beaufort, which is his hometown. He was apparently in town to visit his mother and was found by his wife, Angie, after his daily run.

Tom was a friend and former neighbor for many years till he and his wife moved up to Hilton along Lake Murray.

More than that, Tom was a friend to everyone in South Carolina who cares about honest, efficient government. He was truly one of the good guys. (See Post & Courier editorial of Aug. 31.)

Tom worked for the LAC in various jobs while I was at AP. He then left for a stint at the Department of Social Services before returning to head the council - the state's watchdog agency - in 2009, after I had gone to the University of South Carolina.

Tom was as straight-up a guy as they come. He and I chatted less frequently in recent years - the last time was about a month ago to congratulate him on his daughter's marriage. But while we discussed family, friends, the university and all those things you catch up on, the talk always turned to our experiences with state government and its various political figures. We exchanged some good stories and shook our heads knowingly, sometimes out of exasperation. But Tom also clearly was dedicated to making government run right.

He wasn't one of those on a "waste and fraud" witch hunt. But several of those whose agencies underwent scrutiny under Tom's steady hand likened it to having a proctological exam and root canal while giving a deposition - if it was there, Tom and his examiners were going to find it. That didn't make a lot of people in state government overly happy.

Most S.C. residents, especially those always bleating about taxes and spending, probably don't know who Tom was, if they even have a vague notion of what the LAC is. But they should stop a moment and take note, because he was one of those sometimes vilified "state workers" who, no question, was doing his best to work for them.

Our (Karen's and mine) sympathies go out to Angie; their daughter, Jill; and son, Tripp.

They also go out to those in this state who care about how things run. They've lost a champion for good government.

The LAC has been a bright spot with Tom and his predecessor and mentor, George Schroeder (who also had a brief stint as the state's first inspector general and will now be back at the audit council as interim director). Let's hope any successor is as good.

Update: Tom's obituary.

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Tuesday, August 23, 2011

What he said ... John McIntyre's first-day-of-class speech

John McIntyre, whom I am proud to call a friend, has posted the first-day "welcome" he gives to editing students.

I suspect versions of this will be showing up in classrooms across the nation - maybe the world :)


This is not a gut course. Writing is difficult enough to do. It does not come to us as naturally as speech, and we have to spend years learning it. Editing is even harder. We can write intuitively, by ear, but we have to edit analytically.


Before we even get to the analytical aspect, we will have to do some work on grammar and usage, because if you are like most of the five hundred students who have preceded you here, you will be shaky on some of the fundamentals. You will have to learn some things that you ought to have been taught, and you will have to unlearn some things that you ought not to have been taught


I should also caution you from the outset that this course is appallingly dull. A student from last term complained in the course evaluation that “he just did the same thing over and over day after day.” So will you. Editing must be done word by word, sentence by sentence, paragraph by paragraph, and we will go over texts in class, word by word, sentence by sentence, paragraph by paragraph. No one will hear you if you scream.


I’m going to turn my back for a minute so that anyone who wants to bolt can.
Now, if you are willing to stay—and work—I can show you how it is done.
 There's more good stuff, but you really can't get the full flavor until you know John's somewhat patrician speech pattern - so check this out first.



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Sunday, August 21, 2011

Bad vs. Badly

This from an AP story on Social Security disability:
Patricia L. Foster said she was working as a nurse in a hospital in Columbia, S.C., in 2005 when she was attacked by a patient who was suffering from a mental illness. Foster, 64, said she injured her neck so bad she had a plate inserted. She said she also suffers from post-traumatic stress disorder.
Make that she injured it so badly. "Bad," the adjective, is perfectly fine if you say you are feeling bad. But you injure yourself badly.

The migration from adverb to adjective seems to be led by phrases such as "eat healthy." Let's see if we can slow it down a tad.

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Buffalo Wild Wings adding Columbia location

It looks as if Buffalo Wild Wings is adding a third Columbia, S.C., location - in the Harbison shopping area.

Haven't seen any publicity about it yet, but the permit hanging on the door of the old O'Charley's restaurant on Harbison Boulevard says it's for a BWW.

Looks like they're adding a deck on the left side of the building and cutting lots of holes for new doors.

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And the real Shell gas price is ...

I always love it when merchants run a little shell game on their customers.

Take the Corner Pantry Shell Station at South Lake and Platt Springs roads.

Last week (8/14), the sign said $3.25 a gallon. I drove in, stuck in the Shell credit card, filled 'er up and left - all for $3.259 a gallon.

This weekend - same sign, same price. But now there's a placard on the pump - the "credit" price is actually $3.31. Seems to me if you don't want to scam your customers, you'll tell them on the sign that the price is the cash price. (And doubly annoying is that I'm using a merchant card, not some bank-issued Visa or MasterCard.)

Maybe it's time for some truth-in-advertising legislation like in other states that require showing the different prices.

Thanks, Tucker Oil, which proudly proclaims on its website, "I take pride in treating my customers with fairness and respect." Just one of life's little annoyances. I suspect we'll be seeing more of this kind of stuff from a range of merchants desperate to keep their profit margins up.

I know newsrooms have largely done away with consumer units for fear of alienating local businesses, but this might be a topic to keep monitoring.

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Saturday, August 20, 2011

Bleacher Report U - a great resource

Yep, it's brutal. It's pointed.

And Bleacher Report's new training site, Bleacher Report U, and its other editing resources really should be part of your tool box if you are teaching journalism in a digital age.

Bleacher Report U is designed to help train all those "content contributors" on which it relies for cheap/free labor. (There, I said it.)

The sports site makes no bones about it - it's out to get eyeballs and clicks. Which, of course, includes the inevitable clickwhore slide shows.

But if you aren't exposing your students to this brutal reality of 21st century journalism, you're shortchanging them. You have to sign up for the training, but just copying the module descriptions and goals into a Word doc and handing it out ought to be enough for a good conversation starter.

More valuable, however, are the other writing and editing resources available outside of the B/R-U structure. I'd encourage you to look at a few of these and check out the internal links that will open up even more (some have been around for a couple of years and I am just finding them):

  • The art of the headline - Ryan Alberti's plain-spoken guide
  • If you find the copy-editing cheat sheet, you will also find an invaluable link to a Google doc that shows "before" and "after" versions of headlines. Lots of grist there.
  • There is a full editing case study centered on one article and its revisions. Lots of good stuff (a few minor things I don't agree with, but darn few).
  • The B/R blog entry on prose style with this good opening sentence: On the Internet, form IS content. HOW you write changes the very substance of WHAT you write, because it changes the way readers process and understand your work. 

There are lots of sites out there with plenty of helpful tips on Internet writing, SEO, etc., but this is one of the best at integrating it all and not pulling punches.

One thing I especially like is how it reinforces the idea that copy has to be "centered" not only rhetorically but "spatially":

Rhetorical centeredness speaks for itself. A piece should have a coherent overall structure, with an attention-grabbing introduction and a point-making conclusion. Tangents are okay in small doses, but your job as an editor is to keep a piece progressing at a steady pace. This is delicate work, obviously. The only way to master the craft is to practice it.

As for “spatial” centeredness: It’s important to maintain visual and structural balance in the text. Most pointedly, this means (a) breaking long paragraphs into shorter ones and (b) creating single-sentence “anchor” paragraphs where appropriate. 

Yeah, nothing really new here,  but nicely put and emphasized. This is something that needs to be emphasized much more in print, too. I've always called it "visual grammar." It's one of the reasons that even when we went to computers, editors often printed off longer stories - they could "see" where there might be problems.

Newsrooms in general could learn a lot from this stuff. Read it closely, and, whether you agree, disagree or detest some of the dog-eat-dog tone, for me it highlights many of the reasons traditional newsrooms still struggle online. If they adopted some of these ideas for "print" as well, not only would those pages be friendlier, but shoveling the print version online might work better too.

I recall listening in on a state press association teleconference a while back as editors and publishers debated what training to offer. At one point, it was suggested I do a seminar on online writing.

Fine, I said. "How many of you are rewriting your copy for online?"

Dead silence.

OK, I said after about 10 seconds, "You don't need an online writing course."

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(Thanks to the Community Journalism Interest Group blog for the pointer.)

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Friday, August 19, 2011

Citizen Journalism - what happened to YourHub

A decent retrospective and analysis by Tom Grubisich in Street Fight Daily of what has happened to Denver's pioneering YourHub concept that once was spreading nationwide.

I'm beginning to seriously wonder whether any existing media company can truly pull off hyperlocal, even with things like TribLocal in Chicago.

Meanwhile, here in Columbia, The State is killing off its Neighbors section in print. Not clear yet if it will beef up its online efforts or if it's just throwing in the towel now that Patch is on the ground in some areas.

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Tuesday, August 16, 2011

How newspapers resemble the auto industry

In this month's Tennessee Press, the publication put out by the Tennessee Press Association, Jeff Fishman, publisher of the Tullahoma News, speaks truth to power in his withering comparison of the newspaper and auto industries.

Reprinted by permission:

Newspapers should learn from G.M.
Jeff Fishman

The U.S. auto industry could have saved itself earlier by paying attention to the way its business was eroding and listening to the people who were stealing its market share. U.S. auto executives came back from Japan and refused to transform their work environments from lumbering, stodgy bastions of tradition into places where workers
were encouraged to be creative and innovative.

The situation bears a strong resemblance to the newspaper industry. Let’s take a look at the places where the news industry and the auto industry screwed up:

In the ’80s and ’90s, sales declined as customers were turned off by shoddy quality.

Auto industry: anyone who drove a U.S.-made car in the ’80s knows what I’m talking about. Everything about the cars was sub-par. The seats were uncomfortable; the controls made little sense and were hard to deal with. These were minor issues, compared to the engines seizing and misfiring, the electrical system shorting out, the windows not rolling up (or down), the doors sagging on their hinges.

Newspaper industry: the buyouts and mergers started and with the accountants in charge instead of passionate content creators, many papers gutted staffs and started to run big colorful graphics and lots more wire copy, instead of local content for and about their neighbors. Most papers had a monopoly position in their markets and could pretty
much be assured of making a profit, no matter what they did. Meanwhile, the readers were starting to notice that their newspapers were lacking…how should I say this…news.

The workers felt ignored and belittled, so bad attitudes and fear took over.

Auto industry: the line workers had no power to offer suggestions and, indeed, were punished for speaking up. All that mattered to management was churning out enough cars to meet the quotas, no matter how bad the quality.

Newspaper industry: a culture of irrelevance took hold in newsrooms. The reporters knew the bean counters didn’t care about real news; the accountants just wanted something that would generate money and not get them sued. Many journeyman news professionals I met would, with little encouragement, go off about the corporate “suits” that were putting the vise on the newsrooms to “pop a number.” Reporters that dared to try to make suggestions about long-term changes (like less coverage of city/county government and more enterprising reporting like the underlying reasons for the continuing erosion of middle-class opportunities) were ignored or worse, discarded.

Temporary economic bubble created easy profits thus postponing needed change.

Auto industry: America’s “let’s consume as much oil as we can” faction pushed through tax relief in the early ’00s that meant people who leased a “light truck over 6,000 pounds” could take advantage of tax breaks. What this did was support the Big Three, despite their declining market share. The Big Three were making so much money from SUVs, because they were pretty cheap to make, and Detroit was able to charge about $10-$20,000 more for them than a typical sedan. And, of course, when the tax break ran out and gas prices skyrocketed, they were without a viable product to sell as consumers looked for more efficient cars.

Newspaper industry: the mortgage/real estate boom created a huge advertising windfall for newspapers. Many real estate sections were often larger than the rest of the paper. Thousands of pages of expensive classified ads, paid for by realtor estate agents who were so awash in cash that they didn’t care what the cost was generated huge profits. Of course, the rest of the classified business was under siege at that time. When the real estate market imploded, advertisers abandoned newspapers, looking for cheaper ways to sell their products. Thus newspapers were also left without a viable product to sell.

The industry blamed others rather than conducting an honest self-appraisal.

Auto industry: the Detroit execs blamed Consumer Reports for pointing out that the cars they were building were utterly without redeeming community value (remember the Chevette or the Chrysler Cordoba). They claimed the people rating cars were biased towards the Japanese and were unfairly criticizing patriotic Americans. The U.S. cars were better, if only people would realize that! The industry was in complete denial about how the auto-buying public had turned against it as a result of its collective apathy. Long gone was the nostalgia of people who fondly remembered their first car as independence. They were fed up with cars that broke down as a result of shoddy engineering and the industry’s appetite for greater profits.

Newspaper industry: many publishers viewed competition from radio, cable news, shoppers and yes, the Internet, as being anti-newspaper. The truth was, they had stopped listening to the market, which was craving instantaneous, colorful, creative solutions for news delivery. Not listening to the market was a complete departure from the reason they were successful in the first place. They were successful because they listened and then responded to what they learned.

Transportation, not cars; information, not newspapers

Let’s stop building SUVs and listen to our customers and respond with relevant, thoughtful, engaging, vibrant products that meet the needs of our readers. The public’s desire for credible information has not and will not change even though the delivery method might. Newspapers have been a part of American community life since 1690 and will continue in one form or another for a long time as long as we continue to invest in our core product, information.

The US auto industry finally realized they are in the transportation business, not the auto business. They created innovative, solution-oriented products designed to respond to market changes. The quicker newspapers embrace the fact they are information brokers, not in the traditional newspaper business, the better off the country will be. Our customers, both advertising and readers, are not hesitant about expressing their opinions, positive and negative, on how we are doing our job. News organizations just need to listen and react to their customers’ desires.

For more than 300 years, newspapers have endured the scrutiny of many and will continue to bring relevant news to the citizens of the communities they serve, in print, online with video and audio, or some yet-to-be-realized technology. Newspapers must continue to illustrate a commitment to our trusted customers by respecting tradition while embracing change.

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LinkedIn Privacy Fail

So LinkedIn recently opted everyone into its ad network, which includes sharing some of your info so you can be noted as recommending, sharing or following a brand.

Instructions on how to opt out.

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Monday, August 15, 2011

Another case of read the graphic

Can you spot the discrepancy on this Business Insider post (another case, BTW, of Business Insider's "clickwhore" mentality by putting the stuff in a slideshow)?

Yep, that's $30 to spend, not $20 (which would hardly have been much of a deal at all) - reinforced by not only the $30 in the graphic but the "50% savings." So yes, that "You Missed It!" really does kind of apply to the editing here, doesn't it?

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Monday, August 08, 2011

The hyphen is not evil

In both cases here, the headline writers needed a hyphen. And the first one compounds it with "small businessperson."


Commentary on my Tumbleblog.

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Love these capthcas - grammar intensive

From Happy Place - "Grammar Test Keeps Idiots Off The Internet"

I love it.

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Wednesday, August 03, 2011

Twitter Board for Newsroom

It was nice to see the Boston Globe follow our lead and get a Twitter Board for the newsroom.

OK, a bit tongue in cheek. But ours went up in the Carolina Reporter newsroom this summer.

A bit of the old and new - the new Twitter board and, on right, a sculpture from old type.
Closeup of the board using Tweetdeck and Twitterlists. We put it together using a salvaged Mac Mini and money from the lab fund to buy the 32-inch screen.

Also, while they've been up for over a year now, we haven't really shown off our digital signs. I worked on getting these specifically to show off the work on Dateline Carolina, the sign on the right. The left sign shows announcements in both graphical form and a ticker and has a video feed that we automatically switch among CNN, the Weather Channel, ESPN and the local news depending on the time of day. During the academic year, it also switches over from 4-4:30 p.m. to display the nightly newscast produced by Carolina News for local cable.

We have these in two places in the Coliseum (our offices and classrooms are in the windowless basement for now - new digs coming in two years, we hope). The signs taped on the bottom of each ask people not to poke - oh how I wish we had touchscreen technology on these. Displaying partial stories from the website isn't perfect, but it does give us visibility we didn't have.

Thank to the dean and director for the $$.

Now, what I want to do is set up a second one for Facebook and some important local websites. Firefox has a plug-in that allows you to cycle among tabs - but it doesn't refresh the tabs. Suggestions?

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