Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Not wrong, but confusing as hell


At first glance, one is tempted to go, "Oh, that's why Yahoo can't make its numbers":

Actually, it's not wrong - there are two Nevada jerseys. But if the point is not to confuse the reader at first glance, this one needs a rethink.

HT to Testy Copy Editors.

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