Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Headline of the day

Never good to make the readers do a double-take (was the woman hit, or the child?). A case where you have room on the Web, use the "who was."

While you're at it, correct it to "pickup," the preferred form for the truck. (And if you want to keep it all on one line, change struggling to struggles.)

(Thanks to colleague Chris Roberts for the outpoint.)

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