Saturday, January 31, 2004

Brevity tip:
"The new rule would ban any new cell phone towers from being built within 500 feet of a residential area." If they are new, they must be built. The underlined phrase is not needed. (note - in my original post I dropped the second "new," proving once again that everyone needs an editor. Thanks to Peter McCarthy for outpointing.)


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